Here’s a link to the article to which I'm responding - http://blogs.citypages.com/blotter/2011/02/waunakee_high_school_psych_ward.php#
1) I’m looking at an article that I found on the City Pages’ website reporting a Wisconsin High School dance team’s use of costumes that depicted the mentally ill. The problem I see here is that this dance team was adding to the strong stigma that surrounds suffering from a mental illness. It’s harmful to the students participating, as well as all that would be forced to watch this dance team’s routine. The coach goes as far as comparing the mentally ill to prison inmates. She is participating in destructive discourse by contributing to stereotypes about the mentally ill. This is especially harmful because what today constitutes as “mentally ill” has come to signify any mental problem, even ones far from the straightjacket image used in the dance routine. She is only reinforcing dated, discriminating ideas.
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There are many things wrong with the Waukanee high school dance team dressing up as mentally ill patients in a psychiatric ward. Coach Erin Cotter is passing along the stigma associated with suffering from a mental illness to a whole new generation when she deems it acceptable behavior to use them as a costume. She is portraying mental illness as being something that must be “other people’s problem”. Did she ever stop to think about how prevalent mental illness is in each of our own lives? While not all of us may know someone in psych ward, the image represents each that deals with mental issues, even the smallest of chemical imbalances. What if the very girls doing the dress up have mentally ill parents? Or how about themselves?
Cotter’s defense called upon other teams, who in the past have dressed up in orange jumpsuits to reflect prison inmates. So, she says, what’s the big deal about the mentally ill? The big deal, Erin, is that you are placing two very different groups of troubled people into the same category, and that is not fair. You are claiming that people who have been mentally ill enough to be admitted inpatients are identical to convicted murderers and rapists. While the latter too most likely have their own set of issues, you have allowed the former to be seen as taboo and dangerous. Cotter’s ethics are out of line.
Wow. Horrific.
ReplyDeletePerhaps a way to strengthen your argument Grace would be to comment on the appearance of the girls' hair and make-up. Many mentally ill patients do not have obviously physical indications of their illnesses. Also, how is the Coach's cultural justification working?
""Our intent had nothing to do with mental illness. Our total intent was just a hip-hop dance and the songs and the words that were popular," she said. "The thought never crossed my mind or the school's or the parents' or the kids' that it was about mental illness.""
Are we all brain washed into believing more obscene hip-hop lyrics are OK just because they are popular? I hope not!
Grace (Fiddler)
ReplyDeleteI love the picture in the article. They make themselves look bad without any outside effort.
I think the strong point of your article is that of the reader/attendees personal link to mental illness. This really drives the point that this is more than bad taste (not that fueling stigma isn't just as criminal!) I think you could make a point about what the students are learning from this. Stigma being passed onto younger generations is a step in a oh-so-wrong direction.
Horrific, indeed. I like your addressing 'Erin' directly. Though this is subtle, any chance to show how images construct our reality? We 'see' mental illness through representations (hence what's so wrong here).
ReplyDeleteI almost wrote about this article myself (though I found in the Pioneer Press without the ghastly picture), so I'm glad someone else found this :) When I mentioned this article to my roommate Sarah, she thought i was being way to "politically correct" about being offended. But how can the coach have her girls wearing outfits that say "psych ward" and say it has nothing to do with mental illness? The point about mental illness being "other people's problems" is a really great point and frames the argument well.
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